Wednesday, December 18, 2013

What are Different Heroes' Versions of Justice

       Every hero has a different versions of justice. Some heroes fight minor problems. Some heroes fight major problems. Every hero has a different personality which can affect their version of justice. Every hero is different.
       For Example, Captain America usually is the one to deal with the major crimes such as war. You don't usually see Captain America saving a cat from a tree or catching purse-snatchers. Those are considered minor problems. Another hero that has a different version of justice is Spiderman. He's usually the one help a cat from a tree or catch purse-snatchers. You don't usually see Spiderman as a soldier fighting in war. Spiderman version of justice is within the his community and neighborhood. Another hero would be Green Arrow. Green Arrow is a modern day Robin hood who gives to the poor and takes from the rich. Green Arrow focuses on fighting justice of the lower class. 
      This made me think deeper about humanity because it shows how every hero has a different version of justice. Spiderman teaches you that no matter how small the problem is, a hero is a hero no matter what. Captain America teaches you that you should never hesitate ti fix a problem no matter how big the problem is. Captain America doesn't usually fight minor problems, he fight for the good of mankind.

Tuesday, December 10, 2013

Rethinking Juvenile Justice

        "Rethinking Juvenile Justice," by John schwartz is about how juvenile offenders being prosecuted as adults. Many states are now making it harder to try teen offenders in the adult justice system. I believe that juvenile offenders should't be prosecuted as adults. Kids don't act the same as adults do. Adults know how to control their actions more than we do. Juvenile offenders should not be treated as adults. 
        In the article, the writer says, "Now we realize that to ensure that kids are protected, we have to recognize that they are actually different from adults." Kids are a lot different from adults. They should not be treated like them. The writer also says, "The realization, along with a sharp drop in violent crime and new scientific research  showing that teenagers' brain are fully developed, began turning the tide away from the get-tough approach."Juvenile offenders should not be treated like adults because they don't think like adults. The writer also says, "In 2009, 85 percent of the 1,800 cases in which juveniles were tired as adults over a 10-year period involved middle- to low-level felonies like robert, assault, and burglary.
         This connects to teenagers because it shows how juvenile offenders are being prosecuted as adults for many of the wrong reason. For  example, 2009 only 15 percent juvenile offenders in 1,800 cases were involved in homicides. Only 5 percent of the juvenile offends were involved with first-degree murder. This means that juvenile offenders are being prosecuted as adults for the wrong reasons. Juvenile offenders should not be prosecuted as adults.

Wednesday, December 4, 2013

Airport Mutts

Airport escort dogs
            "Airport Mutts" is about how dogs are being escorted to greet passengers at airports reduces stress from the passengers. Dogs can will help reduce stress from people waiting on hectic securtiy lines and rushing to catch their flight. I think dog escorts should be added to every airport becuase they help reduce stress. They can keep people calm and relaxed. They can also help many problems in airports caused by stress.
             In the article the writer says, "Its program has expanded to 11 dogs, whose owners volunteer to take them around the terminals to greet passengers." This means that these escort dogs are starting to become more popular and are spreading to many airports.  The writer also said, "Los Angeles International Airport last was voted the second most stressful airport in the U. S after Chicago O'Hare- now has 30 stress relieving mutts. This means that now airports are becoming a lot less stressful because of the dogs. Another thing that the writer says is, ' Studies show that people who spend time with dogs have lower blood pressure and less anxiety. This means that dogs because people to act more calm and less anxious. 
            This made me think deeper about humanity because it shows how important dogs can be towards human stress. like it said in the article, dogs can lower blood pressure and less anxiety.This can help people be less stressed and more calm. Without dogs in airports, people will go crazy!

Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Character Change

               Middle School: How I Survived Bullies, Broccoli, and Snake Hill by James Patterson is about   a boy named Rafe Katchadorian who tries to survive his 8 week sleep away camp. It's not just summer camp. It's summer school camp. Character change helps show their feelings change towards other characters.
               In the book Rafe says, "It was true that I couldn't wait to get away from Georgia, even if we would just be on two sides of the same camp but now that Mom and Grandma were about to take off, some teeny, tiny part of me was glad that Georgia would be around. I don't know why. I just was." All of a sudden Rafe's feelings about Georgia change because he knows that even though he doesnt have his mom, he has Georgia by his side. 
              Character change made me think deeper about how people change in real life. Sometimes characters can change based on how they react towards other people after a long period of time.    

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Brooklyn Bulldogs vs. Huskies


It was 3:35 pm when I leaped into my car. My mom asked me how my day was and gave me her phone. I took the phone and looked at the screen. It was an email from the Brooklyn Bulldogs Travel Baseball Organization. They wanted me to come and join their team . I would have to make the decision of leaving the SFX Huskies, a team I had been on since I was 8 years old.
          I couldn’t believe the Bulldogs wanted me. A few years ago, my dad told me that other teams are going to start looking at my skills and watching me play and are going to want me on their teams. The time had finally come.
         After I read the email, I looked at my mom indecisively. 
       “What should I do?” asked her. 
       “I can’t make that decision. It’s your life.” She responded. 
         Later on, when told my dad that I was thinking about joining the Bulldog his eyes were wide open and his jaw dropped to his knees. He couldn’t believe what he had just heard.  After about 20 minutes of thinking he  told me that I had to make my own decision.  
          The next day, as I was walking to school, I saw all of my friends wearing Brooklyn Bulldogs hoodies. I felt like I was the only Husky, in a park full of Bulldogs. I felt like I had to be a Bulldog like everyone else. Would the Bulldogs help me get into a good high school?
          As I thought about my decision. I started to remember all the great times I had with my current team, the SFX huskies. The players, the coaches and the even the parents. The Huskies were my family.
        It was now between the Huskies and the Bulldogs.. In the e-mail, it said that the coaches from the Bulldogs had connections with Poly Prep, Xaverian, Midwood, Berkley Carroll all have great high schools baseball teams that would like to play for. I don’t know if staying with the Huskies will help me get into these great high schools.
       I’ve made the decision to go the Brooklyn Bulldogs. Even though the Huskies are my family, I have to pick the team that will help me get into a good high school. When I made this decision, I knew I wan’t a kid anymore.

Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Watching You

                      "Watching You" by Patricia Smith is about how much the government surveillance should Americans accept to keep the nation safe from any terrorists attacks. I think that the government should surveillance but not too much. Americans should be able to have some type of privacy. It call prevent many terrorists attacks.
                       In the article, it says, "The internet surveillance program, called Prism, started the following year; it involves eavesdropping on e-mails and online chats of foreigners overseas." This is way too much surveillance. Americans should be able to socialize and chat with one another without having to think about the government spying on them. 
                      In the article, it also says, "Information gathered under Prism has helped foil about 50 terrorist plots, according to NSA director Keith Alexander. In 2008, an intercepted e-mail led authorities to arrest an Al Qaeda operative in the U.S who was plotting backpack bombings on the New York City subway." Even though government surveillance is overpowering, it still saved thousands of lives.
                     The article also says, 'Within hours of the Boston bombings... authorities began sifting through a mountain of video footage... By the end of the week, the suspects had been identified and captured before they could harm anyone else." This means that surveillance is helping catch terrorists before they cause more problems.   
                     This made me think deeper about humanity because shows how protective the government is. It also shows that us Americans need more privacy!

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Literary Device- Meaningful Dialogue

                Middle School: How I Survived, Bullies, Broccoli, and Snake Hill by James Patterson is about a boy named Rafe Katchadorian who is a younger sister named Georgia. He tries to a way to survive his 8 week sleep away  camp. Its not just an old summer camp where u learn how to make a camp fire and swim in lakes. It's a summer school camp.  I think Rafe loves georgia but sometimes he can't stand her.
                 One thing that Rafe says in the story is, "Okay, one more more little bit of truth here. It was true that i couldn't wait to get away from Georgia, even if we would just be on two sides of  the same camp. But now that Mom and Grandma were about to take off, some,teeny, tiny part of me was glad that Georgia would be around. I don't know why. I was just." This means the Rafe feels  certain way knowing that even though he'll be away from his mom he'll still have Georgia.
                Another thing that Rafe says is, "The good news was that we had a whole lake between, the boys' side and the girl side. If I was lucky, I'd hardly see Georgia at all for the whole eight weeks. It almost made the summer-school thing worth it." This means that even he loves Georgia, he can't stand her.
               Another quote that Rafe says is "Georgia had packed about eight weeks in advance, checked her list 40 times, and then made a copy of the list to make sure she wouldn't lose it,,, and double checked that too. Ny sister may be smart but she's also nuttier that squirrel's nest on the first day of winter." For a person who dislikes his sister, really talks a lot about her.
               This claim connects to me personally because i have a younger sibling like Rafe. I know how it feels to be annoyed at my younger sibling. Even though  my younger brother is annoying, I still love him.

Wednesday, October 23, 2013

Literary Devices- Meaningful Lines

          Football Genius by, Tim Green is about a boy named Troy White who has the ability to predict football plays befrore they happen. He is the defensive coordinator for the Atlanta Falcons yet he can not figure out a way to make the starting lineup for his football team, the Tigers.I think meaningful lines help craft a better understanding of the book. Meaningful lines help make a part of the story more descriptive and makes the reader think. Meaningful lines turn little things into a big part of the story. Meaningful lines can also show what a characters feeling or actions.
          One meaningful line(s) in my story is, "Mr. Langan said 'You're fired.' Krocks mouth dropped. He looked at Seth, then the owner, before stabbing his finger at Troy." This meaningful line(s) shows that Krock one of the meanest and fiercest people in the Atlanta Falcons organization and defensive coordinator was furious. the way he look at Seth and Troy shows that he knew that they were the cause of him getting fired. Another meaningful line(s) is, "Krock clenched his fists and took a step toward Troy... 'Don't even think about it'... 'I'll tear your eyes out' His mother stepped between him and the coach, her chin up high. Another meaningful line(s) is, "Krock stormed out of the bench area. A reporter came up to him with a microphone. Krock grabbed the man by his shirt and shoved him back into his cameraman, knocking him to the turf." This tells me that Krock is not afraid to be physical.
           This made me think deeper about books and how meaningful lines can affect how a scene is read. Meaningful lines show a characters reactions, and how they deal with certain occasions. Meaningful lines can affect a story in a big way. Meaningful lines describe a moment in a very descriptive way. It can also show how a character feels.
          

          

Tuesday, October 15, 2013

The End of Our Car Culture?

        In the article, "The End of Our Car Culture?" by Alessandra Potenza Thilo Koslowski says, " The iPhone is the Ford Mustang of today." This means that the love affairs with cars are coming to an end. This century is more about technology. More people are riding bikes everywhere they go. They don't even bother to get a license  agree because Americans are now riding bikes wherever they go.
        In the article it says,"Researchers say that the economic recession that began in 2007- though definitely a contributor." Americans today are buying cars less due to economic recession in 2007. The author also quotes, "Today, the resurgence of cities where shops and activities are within walking or biking distance." Today, everything is close together and either in walking distance or biking distance. The article also said,"Instead of driving to meet friends, young people use the Web [any mobile device] to feel more connected, while stricter teen driving laws in many states discourage teenagers from getting licenses." Teenagers refuse to drive because there are more stricter driving laws which puts more pressure on them and they are more connected with each other by using their phones.
         This connects to teenagers because it show how much of a technological era. This shows that teens are more comfortable being to connect to each other through internet and cellphones. America's car culture is dying down. Its time for a new culture-TECHNOLOGY.

       

Tuesday, October 8, 2013

Where Your CellPhone Goes to Die

            The article, "Where Your  Cellphone Goes to Die," is about what happens to your old phones when they are trashed. The article also talks about the cons of waisting cellphones when they can easily be recycled. I think the government should make it illegal to to export or traffic in toxic e-waste. The toxic e-waste of the cellphones can be very dangerous to humans.
            In the article, it says "places in Ghana, India, and China, children into mountains and burn it so they can extract metals-cppoer wires, gold, and silver threads.Children inhale the smoke from burned phone casings as they identify separate different kinds of plastics for recyclers." This means that children have exposure to all these dangerous chemicals from extract metals and burned phone cases. This can lead to lung cancer and other serious health risks. The article also said, " The World Health Organization (W. H. O) reports that even a low level of exposure to lead, cadmium, and mercury-all of which can be found in old phones- can cause irreversible neurological damage and threaten the development of a child." This means that children can be dangerously affected by being exposed to hazardous chemicals such as lead, cadmium and mercury. This can lead the spread of sickness through out the whole country.
                 The US government also needs to take a stand to this dangerous toxic e-waste system.  In the article it said,"The United States, for example, could ratify the Basel Convention, an international treaty that makes it illegal to export or traffic in toxic e-waste. The US is the only industrialized nation that hasn't signed the treaty." I think the US government needs to take this a lot more seriously because it is a very dangerous process that poses serious health risks to children. The article says, : If governments or manufactures don't take action, consumers can still help. We could recycle the ones we no longer use through certified recycling services like e-Stewards, a nonprofit organization that runs certification programs for e-waste recyclers, ensuring that goods are not improperly exported." I don't think we should have to replace our new devices. Why can't we just repair them?
                  This made think deeper about humanity because it makes think about all of the poor countries in the world like Ghana, India, and China that burn piles and piles of e-waste just to get extract metals to sells to merchants for a low price. This are at many serious health risks by doing this dangerous procedures. Is it really worth it?

Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Author's Craft- Literary Devices

       Football Genius by Tom Green is about a boy named Troy White who is a football player with a special talent. He has the ability to predict which plays any football team will run before the play is played. Since his Mom works for the Atlanta Falcons (NFL football team) Troy gets all access to the players and staff of his favorite team. He tries to help the team by using his predictive play calling talents to lead his team to a victorious season.
       Literary devices help craft a better understanding of what's happening in my story. For example, one literary device that author uses is a simile. A simile is a comparison using the words like or as; "their watches sparkles with hundreds of diamonds, as did the pendants hanging from their necks like Olympic medals, and their rings looked like Christmas tree ornaments." This simile means that the jewelry of the NFL players were very shiny, big and expensive. It also tells you that the football players are very rich.     
                                                                                                    

Thursday, September 26, 2013

Terrence Williams

          My name  was chosen because I was my dad’s first boy and so he named him after me. I don’t see my name as a hand - me - down, or a my parents couldn’t think of any other name, i look at it as a present my father to me. My full name is Terrence Terrell Williams Junior. My friends and family call me Tj because the “T” stands for Terrence and the “J” stands for Junior.My father’s name is Terrence Terrell Williams Senior.
          Every day when my teacher takes the attendance, my name is always called last. I don’t look at it as a bad thing, I look at it as the teacher saving the best name for last! I’ve never met anybody with the same name as me. I look at that as a good thing. it makes me feel like my name is unique.
          Some celebrities have my first name. For example, the NBA star and dunk contest winning, Terrence Ross. Terrence Jay is a cool talk show host for 106&Park. Also, Tyler James Williams, A young actor like me who plays the lead role in the popular TV show “Everybody Hates Chris,” which is set in my neighborhood Bed-Stuy.
          The name Terrence sounds like a professor’s name and it looks like it should be written in this “Terrence” kind of format. I think my name sounds like a sophisticated, mature, and intelligent. I wouldn’t change my name for the world!

Tuesday, September 17, 2013

Summer Reading Response

Football Genius by Tom Green is about a boy named Troy White who is a football player with a special talent. He has the ability to predict which plays any football team will run before the play is played. His gifted talent however does not help him get the starting quarterback role on his middle school football team. The football coach gives the starting quarterback role to his not-so-great son instead. Troy wishes he had a father to help and support him in his football dreams. Since his Mom works for the Atlanta Falcons (NFL football team) Troy gets all access to the players and staff of his favorite team. He tries to help the team by using his predictive play calling talents to lead his team to a victorious season.